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Thursday, June 14, 2018

My Speech Critique

Yesterday my class had to present their speeches.  Since I was away, I decided to video myself outside.  I chose to talk about how we all need to play our part and stop polluting the Earth.  I made sure that I had a clear voice.  I was meant to use expression but when you're focusing on reading you just forget, which is what I did.  There was a little bit in there, but not as much as I wanted.
The most challenging part would have conquering my nerves if I was speaking in front of my class, but thankfully as you will see I didn't have to do that.  I hope my words make my peers think about the importance of looking after the environment because that is the whole point of writing a persuasive text - convincing others to agree with what you have to say.

Here is a copy of my speech.  Hope you enjoy.  Nga mihi Helam.



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