Monday, April 10, 2017

go kill possums

WALT use language features of persuasive writing
To be successful I will:
Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

I feel like that i need to add more emotive language and more rhetorical questions.
what i found easy was the writing.
what i found hard was the rhetorical questions.


I believe that in new Zealand we should start killing possums.

My first reason is why is it a problem having too much possums? Well possums they hum plants,trees and eggs at night time when birds go and look for food then the possums came out and eat all of the eggs

My second reason is why bid possums come to Zealand and not go back to Australia? Wall in Australia there are predators.a predator is a creature that hunt and kills other animals like possums and birds that's why possums don’t go back to Australia wall would you like eight possums around you yes or no so make up your mind.

My there reason is why did people bring possums to new zealand? Wall back in the day people thought that it will be good to make possums fur out of clothing but there are too much possums that it makes it harder for farmers to get rid of them because when a possum's has deer then if it gets pass on to a farm animals can die.

My last reason is how can we solved this problem? Can be solved we can make traps and other thing like poison.

In summary i believe that possums should stop humming trees and birds and other animals that they hunt for.

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Wednesday, April 5, 2017