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Tuesday, September 5, 2017

A day at the exhausted factory

In class I had to write a recount from the perspective (view) of a child working in a sweatshop. I chose to be a kid working in a toy factory.

What I was learning in writing was to us descriptive words in my writing.
WALT proof-read our work to make improvements

A day at the exhausted factory

On Monday morning I wearily got out of bed. And head to work When I got there my boss was waiting for me. “Where have you been” he shouted at Me. My hands were shaking like a leaf. And He said “i’m going to put an extra 9 hours on”.
An hour later I walked to my working spot afterword. I got a bit dizzy then my hand got stuck in the machinery. My friend hung bow ran to the machine and turned it off. My hand was crushed but the boss said.” Keep on working” so I kept on working. my hand was shaking in fear.
Hours later the buzzer goes off. “It is time for lunch!” the boss shouted Young bow and I went to go and have lunch. We had a little bit of rice and one slice of tomato. We wished  that we can have meat. 2 hours later the buzzer went off. And we had to work for 10 more hours. We wish that we can just disappear
Finally, it is 12:00 pm. I can finish work and go to sleep. I am too exhausted to work any more. I said to myself then i rushed in to bed. Then I had a dream  my dream was that I could get out. Of this factory then happiness was bubbling in my dream.

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