How do i Sound

I want to work on fluency and expression what I am good at is not rushing my reading.

Geometry-shapes

We have been learning to describe 2D and 3D shapes using words such as edge, face and vertices.

visiting our old house

WALT check that we have used correct structure for recount this week i have been learning to us interesting words

To be successful we will:

• Say who, when, where and what at the beginning of our recount
• Use time words between events (Firstly, After that, next and finally
• End with a reflection (my thoughts about the event)

My next step is to put full stop's at the end of my sentence

On the holidays me and my sister ask my mum if we can go to Rotorua with my nana to visit our old house OK said mum OK i said back to her then we got in the car and we set off but nana want to see her family and she had a sleep so we stayed there the the night then my sister was not listening to my naan so she got a growling than the night was over we got up at like 3:00 in the morning because we had to get there in one day

Then Boom my cousins pot out of my nana’s bot i was surprised to see them when they got out of the bot then my sister had a fight with my cousins naan got angry at the both of them then the two they stop as we were going into Auckland my cousins was hungry so there was a shop so we stop we got sum-thing to eat when nana went to go and revert then BOOM the back of the car was damaged my sister was fright  so was my baby cousins.

Then we stop at my nana’s papa’s house then me,my sister and my cousins we all watch TV then me and  nana went to the shop for her papa then we got back to her papa’s house then the kids got in the car so we side goodbye then we got on to the highway we went past a lots of town then six hours later we were in Rotorua ti was sit the same but when we got to the house then BOOM we got a right from my aunt then i went to play with my baby cousins.

My naan left me my sister with my aunt we went to go and pick up my other nana. Then when we got to her house then we had a shower my sister hop in the shower first then she got out of the shower then i got in the shower i was in there for like 5:00 minutes then i got out of the shower we got change and then we watch a pit of TV at the end of my day when the sun was going down a beautiful sunset came out.

go kill possums

WALT use language features of persuasive writing

To be successful I will:

Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

I feel like that i need to add more emotive language and more rhetorical questions.
what i found easy was the writing.
what i found hard was the rhetorical questions.

Possums

I believe that in new Zealand we should start killing possums.

My first reason is why is it a problem having too much possums? Well possums they hum plants,trees and eggs at night time when birds go and look for food then the possums came out and eat all of the eggs

My second reason is why bid possums come to Zealand and not go back to Australia? Wall in Australia there are predators.a predator is a creature that hunt and kills other animals like possums and birds that's why possums don’t go back to Australia wall would you like eight possums around you yes or no so make up your mind.

My there reason is why did people bring possums to new zealand? Wall back in the day people thought that it will be good to make possums fur out of clothing but there are too much possums that it makes it harder for farmers to get rid of them because when a possum's has deer then if it gets pass on to a farm animals can die.

My last reason is how can we solved this problem? Can be solved we can make traps and other thing like poison.

In summary i believe that possums should stop humming trees and birds and other animals that they hunt for.

do you know how to do tricky division?

W.A.L.T make math strategy to make maths fan for us.

 

W.A.L.T make a Q & A DLO

Here is My Video

this week we have bin learning to make a Q & A reading DLO.

My learning goals